Comments after class critque_02_13_08

I am not clear of what I need to go. My storyboard wasn't effective in what I was trying to say about the error of having sex without being marriage and how important it is to wait. The images of the different teenagers' thinking does place my audience into the minds of teenagers' are thinking about life decisions; however, thinking about being pressure into having sex does not come across. Therefore, I still am pondering how having sex before marriage is one of the most important experience in your life to avoid.