Goal and Reworked Storyboard

My goal is to start with shot 001 with a couple looking face to face to show attracted. This scene will go downward to where the boy is grabbing the girl’s right hand as it fades out into the next scene Shot002. This scene is where the couple is on a train track that leads up to two paths. One path has trees on the tracks and the other is clear but has a mountain in the far ground. This scene will go to Shot003 in which is a close up of Shot002. Shot003 will go back and forward twice than stop in front of the train tracks with the trees covering the tracks path. This screen will fade out at this time to Shot004. Shot004 will show the boy pressuring the girl to do something. This mage will do the same; fade in and out. Shot 005 starts with a close up of the couple making out in a bedroom. This frame will start with the face of them both as it circle around the bedroom to the boy hand on the girl’s shoulder to the center view of the view of the couple. This will fade out into the view of the making out scene than fade out to Shot007. Shot007 will show the blue jean and underwear on the floor as it fades to shot008. Shot 008 will flash on and off to Shot009 to show the girl from being used to being pregnant. Shot009 will start at the face of the girl than downward to the stomach to show her pregnant than fade to Shot010 a full view of the girl pregnant. This will fade out to Shot011. Shot011 will go back and forward like it did in Shot003 but it will end at the clear path as it fade into Shot012. This scene will fade out when it get back to clear track to Shot013. This Shot013 will go in to a progression to zoom in on the Today’s Christian Magazine on the table. Shot014, 015, and 016 will be used to zoom in to the part of the cover of the magazine that states the importance of abstinence and the scripture 1 Corinthians 13:4-6. I hope this visual excise will point out how important it is to make right decision about abstinence.